Oprhan Works article - request!

[ellenmillion]

I've got this monster about finished, but I'm concerned it's a touch too technical and wordy. Does anyone feel like giving it a beta run through - let me know if it's confusing anywhere or gets too legalese-y? Maybe make sure it touches on things about the bill that concerned you specifically?

Let me know if you'd be interested in doing that for me! Comment and I'll add you to a temporary filter that I'll post it to. It came in under 3000 words, so it's not THAT long. Thanks!

In other news, it snows again. Rargh.

In other, other news, bear tracks have been spotted in this new snow on our land.

Comments

[snippetchick.livejournal.com]

I'll have a look if I've got the time :)

[jenleeart.livejournal.com]

I'll be happy to go through it as well