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It's chilly today!

On the action list today:

Work on anthology illustrations
TAXES (*%^&)
Cris' prints - almost finished!
10 emails (which doesn't really keep ahead of them, but I gotta do SOME)
Sea Monsters - got one posted, and revisions to the overview done, as well as about 50% of the northern ocean area revised. More tomorrow.
Anthology layout - finish TOC pages
Finish freelance site - waiting for content.
Image uploading at C-C booyah! Getting towards final refinement stages now!

Urgh. That's too much! I shall do it anyway!

I need help with this illustration (behind cut)! Does the size look appropriate to other snow-unicorn illustrations? Is the positioning of their heads too forced? What else looks awkward? I've got an eraser and I'm not afraid to use it! Redlines, comments, etc all welcome.





And, while I'm at it, comments on this would be welcome, too:

Date: 2011-04-16 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellenmillion.livejournal.com
I wish I'd bounced my older sketches and ideas off you earlier! I was looking at elephant saddles, in part, because of the size issue, so that may be why I set it so far forward. One of my other thoughts was for span of legs, that it might be more comfortable to sit where you didn't have to stretch as much over the barrel, but could swing them forward slightly around where the neck narrowed. I had never even considered that narrow would be a downside, or that the shoulders would move a lot. Could we hand-wave that a little if we say the saddle floats over the shoulders a bit? Or if they had a natural fatty deposit of some kind there? (These were genetically engineered, so it's possible they could have manipulated in some fashion like this.)

I'd be curious to know what you thought of that idea. And also, I'm having a dickens of a time figuring the foreleg position out - if you had a chance to do a redline, I'd be very grateful!



Date: 2011-04-16 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redokapi.livejournal.com
Well, the nice thing about fantasy is that you can make up your own rules. :) In reality, most of the pictures of snow unicorns seem (to me at least) to have the saddle just behind the shoulders.

Anyways, here's some red-line type thingys. I can't figure out how to get my infrequently-used flickr account to just give me the image urls, so here's the links.

Anatomy structure (as I see it)

Anatomy plus Redline

Just redline

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