Review?

[ellenmillion]

Alright, I feel like giving a really solid critique, and my critiques involve lots of pointing out what's wrong and going into depth. I don't like to give these unrequested, so... request! I think I have a few spare minutes today, and, though I'm plugging away at EMG too, darn it, I can do something /I/ want to do, too. Gimme a link and let me know if you want the critique emailed to you or posted (if at a site that allows comments).

Probably have to limit this to the first five or so requests.

Comments

[renatus.livejournal.com]

Give me an hour or so to scan something in and put it up on dragon_child - it's a WIP that I *know* needs soemthing more before I start finishing it but I'm at a loss as to what.

[renatus.livejournal.com]

Ok, maybe an hour was a little bit of an over-estimation. Anyhow, it's up, although it has some minor nudity.

[jemstone.livejournal.com]

Willing to critique fiction?

-JEM

[ellenmillion.livejournal.com]

Hm. Yes, but it's got to be short fiction. No novels! :P