more fish weaving....

[ellenmillion]

Earlier composition for comparison



*flounders* (also still very cutnpasted together... need to settle on a layout before I start fiddling with details. Stupid brain!)



Also, there are new PA pieces up. I only have four left in my queue.

Comments

[curvature.livejournal.com]

I like the last one.
The unicorn is lovely, but I didn't quite understand the egg shape you had it in before.

[pers1stence.livejournal.com]

Either no unicorn or the unicorn outside of the bubble-egg-thing. I'd say overall, probably better to take out the unicorn entirely, to keep the theme on target.

Also, and this is just two random thoughts....Might you not want to give the woman a piece of jewelry that ties her in to the fish and the key/chain. She's all silver and black and grey. They're all gold. And secondly, what's holding her cape onto her shoulders?

[mebird.livejournal.com]

I like the last one best.. unicorn without the egg thingy! I'd also like to see her with a neck chain of sorts, plus more highlights and shadow on the key as it's looking flatter than everything else!

The one without the unicorn whatsoever is also fine.. but I didn't want to see the uni go... :)

[mizkit.livejournal.com]

I second Mary Anne's jewelry suggestion, and propose that the unicorn become a necklace. It ought to be part of the picture, because you've got your unicorn/key thing going, but I'd make it much more subtle by making it into a necklace. You can even keep the teardrop shape that way!

You've done a really nice job with the light across her breasts, btw. Very nice indeed.

[ht.livejournal.com]

I read that as "cuntpasted" XD
There I was thinking, "WHOA! Ellen swore!" And then I was thinking, "That can't be right!", and then I was thinking "Hey look, goldfish!" and then I got lost in the shiny.

Of course, now you've added a new word to my vocabulary XD