Finished!

[ellenmillion]

The skirt needed the most serious work, and I thought all the other suggestions were good, too... I did try to darken/detail the mountains a little more, too, but ended up erasing all that, cause it looked icky. Half-and-half about the texture on the path - I think I would've liked it more if I'd drawn the texture (and the whole path, for that matter) in ink originally.

Client is happy, file is uploading, all is right in the world.