Still too teeny?

[ellenmillion]

Running around accomplished, though I can't assemble more of the grill without a second set of hands. Guppy hands don't count. Except for losing the nuts and bolts and running away with the screwdriver and the instructions.

I am still poking at those ads - the last one was voted too teeny, but I'm wondering if these are better. I could use color, but I feel like that wouldn't tell you, at a glance, about the coloring books. See if you like these:

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[jenny heidewald (from livejournal.com)]

"Except for losing the nuts and bolts and running away with the screwdriver and the instructions. "
Guppy says, "Mission accomplished!"

I was wondering what the "too tiny" stuff was about because I didn't see, or missed what it was in reference to. Bottom two are good, top one is still a bit tiny, maybe zoom more on the unicorn? I know you'd probably like to keep the mermaid in, are you allowed to go portrait wise?

[kelkyag]

You could partly-color them? Or maybe give them a colored frame, especially if you're not sure what background they'll be on.

Hrm. The bare shoulder in the last one makes the "for grown-ups!" tagline a little ambiguous. Possibly just a case of mind-in-the-gutter here, but I'd stay away from anything that, as cropped, could be read as suggesting inappropriate-for-children content.

[sister-bluebird.livejournal.com]

Seconding the partial color idea. This kind of thing: https(colon)//s-media-cache-ak0(dot)pinimg(dot)com/236x/0e/99/7a/0e997aba8783b2b0b969b6030034d94b(dot)jpg would get the point across pretty well.