Once more...

[ellenmillion]

Once more, with feeling critique!



Okay, I've got until the 15th to fix this up... what should I change? Any bits that just beg for some more work? Any newbie digital errors that are glaring to everyone but me? Redlines welcome, I can take and appreciate tough critiques. :)

Comments

[winterswitchery.livejournal.com]

The man in the foreground has kind of..confused me for awhile. Will there be something in his right hand? And are those his fingers are the girls' head?

[winterswitchery.livejournal.com]

V. gorgeous beyond my sleep deprived stupid questions :)

[ratauvan.livejournal.com]

I can't help but think that you should be able to see Smokepath's ears poking through her hair... I know the hair is big, but EQ ears are even bigger. ;)
Same might count for Tendril.

[pers1stence.livejournal.com]

The upper body proportions of the blonde figure in the background look...off... to me, as does the left arm of the redhead on the river bank, especially compared to her right arm.

The water looks good, but the rest of the background scenery, esp. in the lower left corner, look unfinished. Especially given the care and detail in the figures in the foreground and the water.

[sibylle]

dunno, the guys left eye (to the righthand corner of age, next to girls head, that one) looks a bit too far out to me, like it should be slightly closer to his nose.