The skirt blends in waaaaay too much with the wolves. :( The coloring just doesn't seem to match the rest of the piece. (And the rest I really like, btw, lovely combination of soft blends and dark lines)
texture the path a bit? lighten up the back of hill and road to give it a deeper feel. Maybe add asecond shading color to wolf and moose (darker brown, darker gray) other than that, awesome :) as always, but ya know that I am a fan of your art :) *hugs*
Whoah, that is such a fun drawing! Brilliant idea! :D
I'd also like to see a bit more shading on the wolves and moose and the mountains. Just a bit more depth. Just add some loose grain and peebles or some hint of texture to the ground by way of comic book style since that is what you've done with the rest. The grass looks great!
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Date: 2005-06-04 04:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-06-04 05:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-06-04 07:10 pm (UTC)lighten up the back of hill and road to give it a deeper feel.
Maybe add asecond shading color to wolf and moose (darker brown, darker gray)
other than that, awesome :)
as always, but ya know that I am a fan of your art :) *hugs*
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Date: 2005-06-04 08:28 pm (UTC)I'd also like to see a bit more shading on the wolves and moose and the mountains. Just a bit more depth. Just add some loose grain and peebles or some hint of texture to the ground by way of comic book style since that is what you've done with the rest. The grass looks great!
I love them, the wolves, they look so happy! :)
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Date: 2005-06-05 06:55 am (UTC)