New story. :) This was supposed to be a timed challenge with the prompt of 'Frozen,' but I disqualified myself by not reading all the instructions first. It took me about 40 minutes.
That was tantilizing, actually. I love the fluidity of the writing, the descriptions of the gradual shifting between simply living, as you so elegantly put it, and a state of being. The becoming I would have enjoyed learning a bit more about... and I am caught, wanting to know more. I hope that you continue to add to the tale, as it left the taste of something of a longer tale currently in progress?
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Date: 2003-05-09 12:14 am (UTC)