Oh, but the composition has a glorious flow. I love montages, but they're so easy to execute poorly. You have done a wonderful job linking all the elements together!
The lower right corner is the show-stealer, but it's balanced by the action at the top where the humans are just slightly left of center. This is a very well-done montage, with thoughtful choices. You included all the main concepts from the poem. The cracking ice and the silk tie everything together. One fumble on the jewels, not fatal; you've got a plan to fix it. As a whole it looks good.
If you're not making any mistakes, you're not learning, you're coasting.
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Date: 2008-03-05 09:41 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-03-05 10:43 pm (UTC)C'mon, it had to be sung! XD
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Date: 2008-03-05 11:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-06 03:49 am (UTC)Wow!
Date: 2008-03-06 05:26 am (UTC)If you're not making any mistakes, you're not learning, you're coasting.
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Date: 2008-03-06 03:19 pm (UTC)I find myself drawn to the spider crossing the webbing.