Steampunk!! I've been seeing (or noticing) a lot of this type of art lately...but then again, I didn't even know what it was a couple of months ago. :P
I would either move the girl down a bit to a more three quarter view, or extend the picture to include her feet, she looks a bit cut off at the ankles.
I like this conceptually, but can you add some linking shape/texture in the middle background to hook the disparate images together visually as well as conceptually? The 7:5i pm draws my eye too far up into the corner, I think...
You probably have already inked this and all that, because I'm always late reading my flist...
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Date: 2008-04-17 06:33 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-04-17 11:01 pm (UTC)I love it!!
Wow!
Date: 2008-04-18 01:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-18 10:48 am (UTC)I would either move the girl down a bit to a more three quarter view, or extend the picture to include her feet, she looks a bit cut off at the ankles.
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Date: 2008-04-18 09:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-04-26 07:35 pm (UTC)You probably have already inked this and all that, because I'm always late reading my flist...