Yay! Your wording sounds much clearer and more professional as well. Just because Elfwood is run by volunteers doesn't mean it can't be run in a professional manner :)
I agree with Ciri - your wording is much more professional, and it doesn't beat people over the head with sarcasm or give an impression that their work might not be "good enough" for Elfwood. Well written.
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